Orginals!!

hey guys! wrote few songs! been writing for a while! thought to share with u all n hope to hear some comments!!

the first one here is for my..or should i say..our very very beloved SAUMIL sir..the best person and best ever teacher anyone could possibly have...
so here it goes!...

just open ur eyes..its been a lil while..
since u have sure gone..n bid to the sky..
the world seems lonely..but i never asked you y..
y have you gone so early in the sky...?

the angels searched you..
for rockin' the sky..
the pearls have died out..
the oyesters survived..
the last thing you said me was beautiful gudbye..
im never sorry i never replied..

the waves now enchanting..
the birlds have flied high..
they 'ol searched you in the almighty sky..
bt the ocean have dried out..
the bird lost its flight..
bt you are not coming..n im waitin'.. oh my!
come back just for the one last time..
gimme one chance to..
just ask you...y..

well..the second one here..dis song i jus wana perform!! with my girlfriend sitting infrnt! lol...!!!

as the rain falls by..
in d summer night...
thinkin' bout u..
the sun never shines..
my mind just dies..
thinkin' bout u..

grace urself..into my heart..
vil never leave you..
trumble me up..
wen i fall..
i really need you..

thinking bout you..
the night flies by..
just to tell you..
i love you..in the shadows of mine..
thinkin' bout you..

birds stops fly..
d leaves ol dry..
thinkin' bout u..
the shameless time..
just stops by..
to say...i love you...

its a sleepless night..
in the willows of wood..
just to love you..
the days pass by..
wana tell thy..
dat i love you..

its a perfect sight..
in my mind..
to always hold you...
waitin' to resign..
from my wishful life..
and always hold you..

thinkin' bout u..
my mind just dies..
wana give you my life..
thinkin' bout u..
i always smile..
will never forget you...
till i die...!


and about this third song..well i would jus say..sometimes situations in life creates a song for urself on its own!..


things have changed dere course..
n everything jus fell apart..
not regrettin' nething..
cuz i have lived this so far!
n should know that...
u left me wen i needed u the most..
n u should know that..
u walked away wen i wanted u to hold..
n u shld knw that..
im happy..things changed dere course!

big wide laugh on ur face..
have shaped my dropping tears..
ur stuff lied in my room is all been cleared..
n u shld knw that..
i ain't waiting..
n u shld knw that..
im not regrettin'..
n im happy things changed dere course!

dose lafs, dose tears..
dose kisses and d beers!
dat tym, dat moment..
dat hug and love segment..
all led to losing my patience..
n u shld knw that..
im happy dats its over..its all over!


guys! dese were d few of d songs i wrote! do give ur comments...!! vil b writing more dn!!

signing off!
wary!!!